Monday 17 November 2008

Feedback #1

Well done - some interesting and relevant video analysis here. You also are recording your discussions on the track to show ideas development.

There are some improvements needed to your product analysis. Also, the auteur research that you carried out isn't detailed enough (Will - where is yours?)

To secure a level 4 planning, you should annotate your moodboard and I will be now interested to see your ideas on locations, costume and narrative develop.

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